Reply #16: Thanks Dora [View All]

Sound advice and I suspected you'd come back and tell me this again. Marketability aside, and I do understand your points on that, I'm not sure I can write it differently. I don't know how to frame it if I'm not in it if that makes sense. Part of getting all these amazing stories was my interaction in the conversations and where I manipulated and led them. As far as the confessor's role I thought that it would be hard for the audience to believe these soldiers would talk about some of these things if we didn't explore that phenomenom. I'd be happy for some more advice about this Dora I'm just not sure what's left if this isn't partially my story too and how these stories have affected me.