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Plaid Adder Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Wed Aug-06-03 11:03 AM
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For QuestionW: What Did You Do When The Towers Came Down?
This has been floating around in my head for a while and I thought I would finally write it down and offer it to nostamj and the QuestionW folks. Anyone else who wants it is free to copy it, reproduce it, perform it, etc., such as it is. I have a tune for it in my head, but obviously cannot reproduce that here. Given my singing voice, that is probably for the best.

What follows is probably going to be pretty cheesy, although I have tried to do this from the heart. You have been warned.

WHAT DID YOU DO WHEN THE TOWERS CAME DOWN?

My mother was three when we won the world war,
And Kennedy died years before I was born.
I don't remember napalm or My Lai;
When the TV was on, my mom kept me away.
I never knew why people asked "Where were you...?"
Till I heard of the loss of the Challenger crew.
And now every September, we gather around,
And ask, "Where were you when the towers came down?
What did you do when the towers came down?"

"I went to work early--the 94th floor,
With my coffee in hand, and I knew I'd need more.
I hadn't been working for Cantor that long;
I was still terrified I would do something wrong.
Then the steel screamed in pain and the glass went to bits,
And I think I knew something below had been hit,
And the roaring of flame ate up all light and sound,
And I never knew when the towers came down.
I never knew when the towers came down."

"I jammed on my helmet and ran for the door;
And I thought, after all, I've survived it before,
We could not have known what we were running to meet
Till we jumped off the truck and we ran up the street
And saw jet fuel and steel burn and blacken the air,
And I only thought once, 'Christ, we're going in *there*?'
But we climbed toward the fire to beat the thing down--
And that's where we were when the towers came down.
That's what I did when the towers came down."

"There once was a place at the top of one tower
Where my husband washed dishes for eight bucks an hour.
When I heard, my throat closed till I thought I would choke,
And I ran out to fight through the panic and smoke.
I plastered up flyers, so people will know him,
And how, if they see him, to help him come home.
And I *knew* even then he would never be found--
But that's what I did when the towers came down.
And that's all I've done since the towers came down."

And the rest of us, who were not hurt very much,
Still woke the next day knowing we had been touched;
Still felt it unfair, as we learned of the toll,
That our lovers were safe, that our bodies were whole,
And from our helpless distances did what we could--
We gave to the funds or lined up to give blood,
And we wept as we stared at the wound in the ground,
And that's where we were when the towers came down.
That's what we did when the towers came down.

In September, in Texas, the sun still can scorch;
And while George clears the brush, and his wife sweeps the porch,
Maybe some afternoon all the Bush family
Will gather around in the shade of a tree,
And someone will mention that this was the day
That a bright morning sky brought disaster our way
And Jenna and Barbara will sit their dad down,
And ask, "Where were you when the towers came down?
What did you do when the towers came down?"

"I sat in a classroom and read to the kids,
Then I got on an airplane while Dick Cheney hid.
I preyed on their grief and I fanned people's fears,
And learned to brew oil from Americans' tears.
I stood up in the Capitol, armed with a lie,
And told grieving parents that more had to die.
And at nine every night I turned in and slept sound,
And that's what I did when the towers came down.
That's what I did when the towers came down."

For what it's worth,

The Plaid Adder
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rabid_nerd Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Wed Aug-06-03 11:07 AM
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1. Wow
...
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Rainbowreflect Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Wed Aug-06-03 11:41 AM
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10. Wow, is all I can say.
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onehandle Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Wed Aug-06-03 11:13 AM
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2. W wet his pants....
That's why he kept sitting there. They had to formulate an exit plan so the stain in his pants would not be seen. They decided that he should sit there and "dry out". Then he got up and started running away like a pants-wetting crybaby.

You can't make this stuff up, folks!
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jbfam4 Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Wed Aug-06-03 11:16 AM
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3. I still
have goose bumps from reading this..........thanks for sharing.
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ewagner Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Wed Aug-06-03 11:17 AM
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4. Second that WOW!
That's the most powerful writing of 9/11 I have ever read.

Congrats.
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Frances Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Wed Aug-06-03 11:20 AM
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5. We should pass this around
Do you mind if we DUers put this in emails to our friends?
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Plaid Adder Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Wed Aug-06-03 11:22 AM
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6. Forward away, that's what it's for.
Like I said, anyone who wants it is welcome to it. Send it anywhere you want.

C ya,

The Plaid Adder
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havocmom Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Wed Aug-06-03 11:30 AM
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8. thanks, Plaid Adder
You have given voice to those of us unable to get caught up in the idiotic fevor of equating 9-11 with blindly following the criminals in power in Amerikka.

Thank you for your voice and genorisity. Am sending your words out to some to sheep who keep sending me pap.

Blessings and strength.
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Plaid Adder Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Wed Aug-06-03 01:08 PM
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13. Thanks, Havocmom!
:kick: for the afternoon crowd,

The Plaid Adder
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nostamj Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Wed Aug-06-03 11:30 AM
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7. interesting...
my writing partner and I wrote a post-9/11 song called: Something I Never Considered and one of the key lines is "where were you when the Towers came down?"

I've got this bookmarked and would be happy to put it in the "Reader" section of the site...
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Plaid Adder Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Wed Aug-06-03 11:34 AM
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9. GMTA
I was kind of surprised that there wasn't something like this out there...and now I know there is. I haven't been to the ?W site in a while, so if you have yours up I haven't seen it. It is a genuine example of the collective unconsciousness! Spoooky!

Anywhere you want to file it is fine with me,

The Plaid Adder
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nostamj Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Wed Aug-06-03 11:59 AM
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11. i haven't posted it on ?W
but there's LOTS of amazing new art in the gallery...



from Ivory_Tower
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Plaid Adder Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Wed Aug-06-03 12:22 PM
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12. Most excellent!
It really captures the Zen of ?W.

C ya,

The Plaid Adder
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nostamj Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Wed Aug-06-03 02:14 PM
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20. "the Zen of ?W"
I love that! Should be an essay.......... ???
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Plaid Adder Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Wed Aug-06-03 04:15 PM
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25. Well, I dunno much abotu Zen,
but ?W art has always had kind of a Zen feel to me. There's something sort of enigmatic about the question mark all on its own without a question to hook it up to.

What is the sound of one president lying?

The Plaid Adder
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The White Rose Donating Member (804 posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Wed Aug-06-03 01:22 PM
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14. Very, very good.
Any publishers at DU?
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noonwitch Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Wed Aug-06-03 01:32 PM
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15. You've got to find someone who will sing/record it
Somebody has to be the anti-Toby Keith/Charlie Daniels.
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Plaid Adder Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Wed Aug-06-03 01:40 PM
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16. I hope some intrepid DUer will come forward and volunteer
because I am not the one. I can't sing worth a damn nor do I play the guitar.

C ya,

The Plaid Adder
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nostamj Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Wed Aug-06-03 02:15 PM
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21. my composing partner
doesn't usually work on any lyrics but mine...

but, I'll give him a copy and see if any inspiration hits...
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Plaid Adder Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Wed Aug-06-03 02:34 PM
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23. Thanks, nostamj
Let me know if anything comes of it, I would be interested to hear the tune he comes up with.

C ya,

The Plaid Adder
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Tansy_Gold Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Wed Aug-06-03 05:28 PM
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30. words, music, pictures, action ---
Really, it ought to be a flash movie.

Someone should put out a call to Symbolman. . . .
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Plaid Adder Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Wed Aug-06-03 10:41 PM
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35. Hey Symbolman! You out there?
How about it?

:kick: for the night owls,

The Plaid Adder
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eyesroll Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Wed Aug-06-03 01:54 PM
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17. Wow, Plaid Adder...
Powerful.

I'd suggest leaving it as a spoken-word poem. It has the same rhythm as a lot of classics. ("A Visit From St. Nicholas" AKA "The Night Before Christmas" comes to mind.)
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tom_paine Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Wed Aug-06-03 01:58 PM
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18. Incredibly powerful, Plaid Adder
I am going to send this to some people.
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Stephanie Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Wed Aug-06-03 02:05 PM
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19. Greetings from NYC
That's beautiful, Plaid Adder. Thank you.

Someone has to record it. Send it out to your favorite singer.
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RedSock Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Wed Aug-06-03 02:26 PM
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22. wow is right
fuckin A. that is great!
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Sophree Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Wed Aug-06-03 02:41 PM
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24. Very beautiful
Not cheesey at all.
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JackRiddler Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Wed Aug-06-03 04:20 PM
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26. Thanks - and here's mine
Very good work!

I wrote one on the same topic, which can be sung to the Beatles's "While My Guitar Gently Weeps":

Rome is aflame - the plebeians are dying (echo: burning!)
While Dubya Three learns to read.
What fools were we that day - who only went flying (working!)
While Dubya Three learned to read.

Of my true love's truest smile, of her ev'ry waking mile
What is left to sort into the tomb?
Only vapor and tired freedom-justice-sibling dreams
Down to Ground Zero fall these dreams

Centurions expire in the arms of their slaves
"Lucky me, guess I hit the Trifecta."
Even Senators must crouch down in cramped and sealed caves
"If I was Dictator, It would be easier"

This isn't what we might have thought - Jesus would at this point do
'tis a strange reaction - from the captain and his crew
Is this really the right time - for leadership to cry?
Or should we better wonder who struck the match?

No corner of the world - is untouched or unknowing
When rogues speak for God in the Pantheon (the Pentagon, the Pantheon...)
Ten thousand pounds an inch on us down will be pressing
As the brokers add value on to Raytheon (the Pentagon, the Pantheon, the Raytheon...)

I don't know how - you were diverted
You were perverted - to tyranny's creed
You never knew how - to do without your war
O, will your ship of freedom ever come?

I still wait, naive, for the day of America (a miracle, heretical!)
What's this America, you say?
America never was - America to me (kill machine - unfree!)
Still America one day must finally be.

----------------------------------------

Shout out to Langston Hughes
and to all who've known the blues
to Zora Neale and Emma Goldman
to the Haymarket Eight and Sacco and Vanzetti
to Julius and Ethel and the Crazy Beats
America, why must you eat your children?
Yeah, to JFK and Bobby too
to Malcolm X, Martin Luther King and Fred Hampton
to Paul Wellstone, the latest one they've killed - to Jim Hatfield
and to the man who could not be here tonight
to the Prophet of Tippecanoe
Tecumseh, take it away - can free your people?
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mithnanthy Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Wed Aug-06-03 04:51 PM
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27. The talent here at DU is amazing
Thanks for the perspective through your touching verses.
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Plaid Adder Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Wed Aug-06-03 05:06 PM
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28. For more DU talent, check out the poetry slam
Edited on Wed Aug-06-03 05:08 PM by Plaid Adder
From Feb 12...truly a cornucopia of poetic delights. Uly put the whole thing up on his site...you still have the URL, Uly?

C ya,

The Plaid Adder
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Plaid Adder Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Wed Aug-06-03 05:12 PM
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29. You go, JackRiddler!
And that's gotta be a hard song to write to, too. :toast:

C ya,

The Plaid Adder
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nostamj Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Wed Aug-06-03 05:28 PM
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31. SOMETHING I NEVER CONSIDERED
I referenced this lyric earlier in the thread because of the synergy of the 'where were you when the towers went down?' reference.

this is the vocal arrangement for an ensemble of four. it was planned for a revue I produced last year but didn't make the final cut of songs for that evening.

SOMETHING I NEVER CONSIDERED - Ensemble

<Solos:
IT WAS SOMETHING I NEVER CONSIDERED.
SOMETHING I NEVER CONSIDERED AT ALL.
IT WAS NOTHING YOU'D EVER IMAGINE COULD HAPPEN
NOTHING YOU'D EVER IMAGINE COULD HAPPEN AT ALL.

<Ensemble:
THEN IT HAPPENS
AND WE KNOW WE'VE BEEN CHANGED
AND THE FEELING IS STRANGE
IT IS TOO NEW
CAN I ASK YOU:

WHERE WERE YOU WHEN THE TOWERS WENT DOWN?
<Echo>TOWERS WENT DOWN

<Solos:
WHERE WERE YOU
WHEN DID YOU
HOW DID YOU
WHO WAS THE PERSON
<Esemble:
THE FIRST ONE
<Echo>THE FIRST ONE
YOU REACHED FOR?

THIS WAS SOMETHING I NEVER CONSIDERED AT ALL.
I DON'T LIVE IN A CITY WHERE BUILDINGS CAN FALL.
THIS WAS SOMETHING I NEVER CONSIDERED
<Solos:
ON SUCH A BRIGHT MORNING
I WAS LATE FOR A MEETING
I HAD TICKETS TO SEE A HIT PLAY
SUBWAY DELAYS
<Ensemble:
THEN IN A SECOND
PRIORITIES AREN'T SO
IMPORTANT.

HAVE I EVER BEEN THIS SCARED?
OR KNOWN THIS KIND OF
SORROW AND RAGE
SORROW AND RAGE
SORROW AND RAGE AND
AND THE SENSE THAT I NEED TO DO
SOMETHING
SOMETHING OTHER THAN CRYING
SOMETHING OTHER THAN
SORROW AND RAGE
SORROW AND RAGE
<sotto voce]
SORRY I SHOUTED
I STILL GET EMOTIONAL
<silent for two measures of underscoring>
IT WAS SOMETHING I NEVER CONSIDERED
CONSIDERED AT ALL...
NOW I LIVE IN A CITY
WHERE BUILDINGS CAN FALL...

lyrics copyright 2002 by jeff matson
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Plaid Adder Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Wed Aug-06-03 05:31 PM
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32. Thanks for posting that, nostamj
Edited on Wed Aug-06-03 05:32 PM by Plaid Adder
but are you sure you want the name at the bottom?

Wish I could hear the arrangement,

The Plaid Adder
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nostamj Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Wed Aug-06-03 05:34 PM
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33. my name is no secret
it's in my profile. it's been online re: ?W. i'm so past caring.

I wish you could hear it too! the music is hypnotic--then jarring. a little philip glass but with this mounting sense of menace behind it...

someday you'll be able to buy the original cast recording
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nostamj Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Wed Aug-06-03 07:14 PM
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34. kick!
i am such thread death...
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JackRiddler Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Thu Aug-07-03 02:38 AM
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36. nother kick mon
me too
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Plaid Adder Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Thu Aug-07-03 09:24 AM
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37. Thanks mon
:kick: for nostamj and JackRiddler

The Plaid Adder
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TeeYiYi Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Thu Aug-07-03 10:53 AM
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38. kick
TYY :kick:
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