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...just another hapless victim of bush*'s "No Child Left" plan. I'll try and correct the spelling and grammatical errors which are so painfully evident. I weep for the children :(
"I lurk on DU. It helps to understand the weirdness."
Nice try. What he meant obviously was: "I learn on DU. It helps to understand the weirdness." Clearly "Hooked On Phonics" works for, er...everyone else. -15
"ABC News has admitted that Saddam Hussein and al Qaeda were linked through top terrorist Ayman Aal-Zarqawi - and were so linked before the U.S.-led invasion of Iraq."
Sloppy study habits indicated here, he might want to practice effective note-taking. He meant to say: "ABC News has admitted that the BFEE and al Qaeda were linked through top terrorist Osama bin Laden - and were so linked before the 9/11 attacks." (actually the relationship dates back to when the BFEE learned that Saudi money spends just as good as our own, but I know memorizing all those dates can be problematic for young students) -15
"Captain Ed has posted a good summary and analysis, with links, at Blogs For Bush, and Cori Dauber also has a good summary."
I'm in the dark what is meant by this cryptic statement. "Captain Ed" could perhaps refer to an imaginary friend. Lonely children lacking in social skills often invent such mental constructs. I'll write a memo for the school psychologist. Nevertheless, the student certainly understands the necessity of links, since even his "Captain Ed" apparently uses them. -15 for the missing link. ;)
"ABC News, in a long report posted on its website, said this:
Snip:
In late 2002, officials say, Zarqawi began establishing sleeper cells in Baghdad and acquiring weapons from Iraqi intelligence officials."
There is just no excuse for this...none at all. Perhaps the "2002" is a typo? Perhaps the student is unaware that in 2002 ABC (and others) were also reporting officials saying that Saddam Hussein had massive stockpiles of chemical and biological weapons and could strike within 45 minutes? He might just as well report what officials were saying in 1002 for all the significance it has now. There have indeed been many sleeper cells established, but not in Baghdad. An MRI of this student's cranium would reveal them. Perhaps it's due to the glue-sniffing, I don't know. At times I grow discouraged with the teaching profession because of students such as this one. -15 for grossly insufficient research and an additional -15 for the missing link. ;)
"Any bets that the anti-war, anti-Bush Left (you and your fellow travelers) will now stop screaming that there was "no link" between Saddam and al Qaeda? Yeah, right. I didn't think so."
Well now, it seems I gave up on the lad too soon! He's certainly aced this last one!:D
Total Score: F (25%):dunce:
I recommend an intensive course of summer instruction at DU for this student, with retesting before the Fall semester.
So...you see? It wasn't hate mail at all! Just a slow lurker. Oops, I mean a slow learner! :D
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