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RetroLounge Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Fri Mar-31-06 09:01 AM
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The RetroLounge Daily Poem Thread (Fri 3/31/06)
Clenched Soul

We have lost even this twilight.
No one saw us this evening hand in hand
while the blue night dropped on the world.

I have seen from my window
the fiesta of sunset in the distant mountain tops.

Sometimes a piece of sun
burned like a coin in my hand.

I remembered you with my soul clenched
in that sadness of mine that you know.

Where were you then?
Who else was there?
Saying what?
Why will the whole of love come on me suddenly
when I am sad and feel you are far away?

The book fell that always closed at twilight
and my blue sweater rolled like a hurt dog at my feet.

Always, always you recede through the evenings
toward the twilight erasing statues.

Pablo Neruda

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RL

If you have a request for a certain Poet, post their name in the thread and I will find a poem by them and post it...

if you want to see some of my poetry, see the blog at:
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Loss is cumulative. But so is poetry, and art, and
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yvr girl Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Fri Mar-31-06 09:04 AM
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1. Hi baby!
:loveya:
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RetroLounge Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Fri Mar-31-06 09:08 AM
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2. Well, hello there Doll!
:hi: :loveya: :hug:

RL
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yvr girl Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Fri Mar-31-06 09:15 AM
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3. Let's go play hookey today
How does a day of snuggling up and watching old movies sound to you?
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RetroLounge Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Fri Mar-31-06 10:26 AM
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4. Like heaven. I'll be right over...
:hi:

RL
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CaliforniaPeggy Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Fri Mar-31-06 10:45 AM
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5. My dear RetroLounge........
This one is surpassing sad.......

And beautiful, all at the same time!

I love it.....

Thank you.......

:loveya: :hug: :cry:
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RetroLounge Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Fri Mar-31-06 11:44 AM
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6. This one is surpassing sad...
Yeah, that's how I feel everyday. But less and less so, as cruel time goes by...

:hug:

RL
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RetroLounge Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Fri Mar-31-06 03:36 PM
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7. Afternoon kick...
:kick:

RL
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lizziegrace Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Fri Mar-31-06 03:42 PM
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8. That's too close to home
:(
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RetroLounge Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Fri Mar-31-06 04:36 PM
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9. Yeah, I know
:hug:

RL
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