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RetroLounge Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Fri Jun-30-06 11:42 AM
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The RetroLounge Daily Poem Thread (Fri 6/30/06)
The Story We Know

The way to begin is always the same. Hello,
Hello. Your hand, your name. So glad, Just fine,
and Good-bye at the end. That’s every story we know,

and why pretend? But lunch tomorrow? No?
Yes? An omelette, salad, chilled white wine?
The way to begin is simple, sane, Hello,

and then it’s Sunday, coffee, the Times, a slow
day by the fire, dinner at eight or nine
and Good-bye. In the end, this is a story we know

so well we don’t turn the page, or look below
the picture, or follow the words to the next line:
The way to begin is always the same Hello.

But one night, through the latticed window, snow
begins to whiten the air, and the tall white pine.
Good-bye is the end of every story we know

that night, and when we close the curtains, oh,
we hold each other against that cold white sign
of the way we all begin and end. Hello,
Good-bye is the only story. We know, we know.

Martha Collins

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RL

If you have a request for a certain Poet, post their name in the thread and I will find a poem by them and post it...

if you want to see some of my poetry, see the blog at:
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miss_american_pie Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Fri Jun-30-06 11:48 AM
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1. Oh a villanelle
Lovely. :hi:
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RetroLounge Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Fri Jun-30-06 11:50 AM
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2. Felt like a little formality today...
:D

:hi:

RL
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miss_american_pie Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Fri Jun-30-06 11:53 AM
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3. Sylvia did it better
Mad Girl's Love Song

"I shut my eyes and all the world drops dead;
I lift my lids and all is born again.
(I think I made you up inside my head.)

The stars go waltzing out in blue and red,
And arbitrary blackness gallops in:
I shut my eyes and all the world drops dead.

I dreamed that you bewitched me into bed
And sung me moon-struck, kissed me quite insane.
(I think I made you up inside my head.)

God topples from the sky, hell's fires fade:
Exit seraphim and Satan's men:
I shut my eyes and all the world drops dead.

I fancied you'd return the way you said,
But I grow old and I forget your name.
(I think I made you up inside my head.)

I should have loved a thunderbird instead;
At least when spring comes they roar back again.
I shut my eyes and all the world drops dead.
(I think I made you up inside my head.)"


:D
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RetroLounge Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Fri Jun-30-06 11:55 AM
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4. Dylan did a pretty good job too
Do not go gentle into that good night

Do not go gentle into that good night,
Old age should burn and rave at close of day;
Rage, rage against the dying of the light.

Though wise men at their end know dark is right,
Because their words had forked no lightning they
Do not go gentle into that good night,

Good men, the last wave by, crying how bright
Their frail deeds might have danced in a green bay,
Rage, rage against the dying of the light.

Wild men who caught and sang the sun in flight,
And learn, too late, they grieved it on its way,
Do not go gentle into that good night,

Grave men, near death, who see with blinding sight
Blind eyes could blaze like meteors and be gay,
Rage, rage against the dying of the light.

And you, my father, there on the sad height,
Curse, bless, me now with your fierce tears, I pray.
Do not go gentle into that good night,
Rage, rage against the dying of the light.

Dylan Thomas

:9

RL
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CaliforniaPeggy Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Fri Jun-30-06 06:05 PM
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5. My dear Retro!
Ah, this poem speaks to me, especially today.....

How perfectly beautiful it is!

Thank you.....


Just perfect!



:loveya: :hug:
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