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My Good Babushka Donating Member (966 posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Sun Jun-10-07 08:08 PM
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my rainpoem
Rain had lapped up and warbled the windows. The room was obscure. In the shadow like a child secreted beneath a table, I made my thoughts to froth and foam. Holding them in my mouth, I swallowed them unspoken. As the full stain of night bloomed, I took down my drowning bag from its silver nail. I emptied its contents, warm and brackish, onto the floor. What bounty! What ruins! There, an apostle's spoon, and there, a chipped tooth nestled in a baby's shoe. Here, a mother of pearl knife handle, and there, raveled stockings. A green glass jar filled with something viscous, pungent, unknowable. An amethyst brooch. He put on one disguise after another and came nearer. He sidled up close to me and I tried to catch him tight in that sack. He broke loose and fled. I listened to the drip drip of the rainspout.
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CaliforniaPeggy Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Sun Jun-10-07 08:15 PM
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1. My dear House of Kewpie...
I really like this.....

A great bunch of images!

Haven't seen you posting here in the Lounge before....Welcome!

And keep 'em coming, OK?

:hi:
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My Good Babushka Donating Member (966 posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Mon Jun-11-07 07:28 AM
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2. Thanks!
I was going to post in the writing forum, but I'm not really a very good writer, and I don't know anyone over there. I usually just go to General Discussion and here. Thanks for taking the time to read my work, CaliforniaPeggy!
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