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Orrex (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore | Fri Jun-15-07 01:11 PM Original message |
Grammar/structure assistance, please |
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RebelOne (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore | Fri Jun-15-07 01:20 PM Response to Original message |
1. Actually the correct way to quote someone would be to write |
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Orrex (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore | Fri Jun-15-07 01:27 PM Response to Reply #1 |
3. Doh! That second quote was an idiot's typo (mine) |
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Giant Robot (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore | Fri Jun-15-07 01:23 PM Response to Original message |
2. I've seen writers do that |
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pokerfan (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore | Sun Jun-17-07 04:52 AM Response to Reply #2 |
16. It was a dark and stormy night |
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rug (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore | Fri Jun-15-07 01:28 PM Response to Original message |
4. I suggest this: |
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Orrex (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore | Fri Jun-15-07 01:44 PM Response to Reply #4 |
5. You're way off |
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Lars39 (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore | Fri Jun-15-07 02:04 PM Response to Original message |
6. Try this... |
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montanto (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore | Fri Jun-15-07 03:35 PM Response to Original message |
7. Is this about a three-way? |
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Orrex (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore | Fri Jun-15-07 09:44 PM Response to Reply #7 |
8. If I tell you now, it'll spoil the surprise |
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Redstone (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore | Fri Jun-15-07 09:46 PM Response to Original message |
9. No, no, no. If Elizabeth "cut in," the "she said" is superfluous. |
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Orrex (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore | Sat Jun-16-07 11:48 PM Response to Reply #9 |
15. I'm not sure about that, at least not as it's currently structured |
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Lyric (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore | Fri Jun-15-07 09:57 PM Response to Original message |
10. my suggestions |
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dropkickpa (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore | Fri Jun-15-07 10:04 PM Response to Original message |
11. Holy crap |
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Orrex (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore | Sat Jun-16-07 11:27 PM Response to Reply #11 |
12. I don't know what kind of hard core experiences you're having... |
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dropkickpa (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore | Sat Jun-16-07 11:43 PM Response to Reply #12 |
14. Okay, that settles it |
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Maru Kitteh (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore | Sat Jun-16-07 11:39 PM Response to Original message |
13. Less clumsy: |
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