Democratic Underground Latest Greatest Lobby Journals Search Options Help Login
Google

I absolutely LOVE this poem

Printer-friendly format Printer-friendly format
Printer-friendly format Email this thread to a friend
Printer-friendly format Bookmark this thread
This topic is archived.
Home » Discuss » The DU Lounge Donate to DU
 
Lyric Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Sun Jan-13-08 06:28 AM
Original message
I absolutely LOVE this poem
Edited on Sun Jan-13-08 06:30 AM by oktoberain
It's by a local poet, too--and a professor at my college. I feel so lucky to have the opportunity to meet and maybe even be taught by this man.

Want - James Harms, from Freeways and Aqueducts

I want nothing more than this:

to hear the blood in your hands when they touch my face;
to listen at the edge of sleep to your breath grown steady;
to fix the torn hem in your favorite dress before you return
from a day of errands;
to never seek your notice of the small ways, the slight repairs
of love;
to sear red peppers on a grill, the strips of steak, to pour the drinks
and hear through the kitchen window the phone ring,
your laughter;
to love from a distance as you laugh;
to fear truthfully, like a sparrow in the dark weeds, instead
of hopelessly as I do when your image, for whole seconds,
flickers loosely and vanishes, my mind a lit theater,
the film on fire.
to smile quietly when your back is turned, because it isn't time yet
to say it again;
to ache a little less in your absence;
to feel the hush that follows rain as silence and not a figure for loss;
to find your fingerprints in the soil of a house plant, to fill them
with water;
to want for all things but not for you;
to know my wanting is a way of holding;
to hold without hurting;
to leave the windows open, to find a room filled with pear
blossoms, to leave them there for days, to find them
in your hair.

Printer Friendly | Permalink |  | Top
Rising Phoenix Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Sun Jan-13-08 07:03 AM
Response to Original message
1. its beautiful
Printer Friendly | Permalink |  | Top
 
Rising Phoenix Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Sun Jan-13-08 07:03 AM
Response to Original message
2. dupe
Edited on Sun Jan-13-08 07:03 AM by Rising Phoenix
Printer Friendly | Permalink |  | Top
 
RetroLounge Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Sun Jan-13-08 09:06 AM
Response to Original message
3. That is so absolutely beautiful...
to smile quietly when your back is turned, because it isn't time yet
to say it again;
to ache a little less in your absence;


:hi:

RL
Printer Friendly | Permalink |  | Top
 
Lyric Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Sun Jan-13-08 12:50 PM
Response to Reply #3
5. I agree.
This part really struck me:

to feel the hush that follows rain as silence and not a figure for loss;
to find your fingerprints in the soil of a house plant, to fill them
with water;


The imagery there is just hauntingly beautiful to me.
Printer Friendly | Permalink |  | Top
 
Tuesday Afternoon Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Sun Jan-13-08 09:08 AM
Response to Original message
4. to ache a little less in your absence;
I know this one, very well.
Printer Friendly | Permalink |  | Top
 
CaliforniaPeggy Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Sun Jan-13-08 03:46 PM
Response to Original message
6. My dear oktoberain...
I didn't see this one when you originally posted it...

But how glad I am to have seen it now...

Absolutely beautiful!

Oh, how it speaks to me...

This line especially:

to ache a little less in your absence...


I hope you can take a class from him! To be in touch with such a brilliant mind is a gift!

Thank you...

:hug:
Printer Friendly | Permalink |  | Top
 
tigereye Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Sun Jan-13-08 03:47 PM
Response to Original message
7. that's very, very nice
really nice use of language - very vivid!
Printer Friendly | Permalink |  | Top
 
DU AdBot (1000+ posts) Click to send private message to this author Click to view 
this author's profile Click to add 
this author to your buddy list Click to add 
this author to your Ignore list Thu May 16th 2024, 04:19 AM
Response to Original message
Advertisements [?]
 Top

Home » Discuss » The DU Lounge Donate to DU

Powered by DCForum+ Version 1.1 Copyright 1997-2002 DCScripts.com
Software has been extensively modified by the DU administrators


Important Notices: By participating on this discussion board, visitors agree to abide by the rules outlined on our Rules page. Messages posted on the Democratic Underground Discussion Forums are the opinions of the individuals who post them, and do not necessarily represent the opinions of Democratic Underground, LLC.

Home  |  Discussion Forums  |  Journals |  Store  |  Donate

About DU  |  Contact Us  |  Privacy Policy

Got a message for Democratic Underground? Click here to send us a message.

© 2001 - 2011 Democratic Underground, LLC