Democratic Underground Latest Greatest Lobby Journals Search Options Help Login
Google

The BlueIris Semi-Nightly Poetry Break, 5/8/08 (warning: graphic language)

Printer-friendly format Printer-friendly format
Printer-friendly format Email this thread to a friend
Printer-friendly format Bookmark this thread
This topic is archived.
Home » Discuss » The DU Lounge Donate to DU
 
BlueIris Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Thu May-08-08 10:11 AM
Original message
The BlueIris Semi-Nightly Poetry Break, 5/8/08 (warning: graphic language)
Edited on Thu May-08-08 10:12 AM by BlueIris
—from "Have You Ever Faked An Orgasm?"

The Return

When I open my legs to let you seek,
seek inside me, seeking more, I think
"What are you looking for?" and feel it will
be hid from me, whatever it is, still,
or rapidly moving beyond my frequency.
Then I declare you a mystery
and stop myself from moving and hold still
until you can find your orgasm. Peak
is partly what you look for, and the brink
you love to come to and return to must
be part of it, too, thrust, build, the trust
that brings me, surprised, to a brink of my own...
I must be blind to something of my own
you recognize and look for. A diamond
speaks in a way through its beams, though it's dumb
to the brilliance it refracts. A gem at the back
of my cave must tell you, "Yes, you can come back."...

Have You Ever Faked an Orgasm?

When I get nervous, it's so hard not to.
When I'm expected to come in something
other than my ordinary way, to
take pleasure in the new way, lost, not knowing

how to drive it back to sureness...where are
the thousand thousand flowers I always pass?
the violet flannel, then the sharpness?
I can't, I can't...extinguish the star

in a burst. It goes on glowing. Your head
between my legs so long. Do you really
want to be there? I whimper as though...silly...
then get mad. I could smash your valiant head.

"You didn’t come, did you?" Naturally, you know.
Although, I try to lie, the truth escapes me
almost like an orgasm itself. Then the "No"
that should crack a world, but doesn't, slips free.

I Consider the Possibility

Long waisted, tender skinned and, despite the gym,
love roll about the midriff above the leggy limbs
muscled into knots at each calf, "beautiful for your age,"
—bend over naked from your waist and show your red half
peach of a cunt to me who has fumbled at my cage
trying key after key in the stuck door with a half laugh
after each failure, let me lay the bone of my nose
on the peach flesh and lift up my mouth to the pit
as I reach my arms toward the inverted throes
of your breasts, and as I touch your orange nipple tips
know that I have striven all my life toward men
and now, marriageless again, gossiping with my mother
who bluntly suggests that there are always women
and upon being merrily teased by my therapist
at the prospect of our love affair (thinking that "the other"
has never incited such laughter), let me touch your wrist
at the dinner table, and begin the silly maneuver
that will lead me to hold your head, to smooth your
hair all back, as going through keys at the door my own wrist
finally turns tender side up as the lock untwists.

—Molly Peacock

Printer Friendly | Permalink |  | Top
BlueIris Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Fri May-09-08 12:24 AM
Response to Original message
1. Darn. And I thought this would be my most popular thread ever.
Printer Friendly | Permalink |  | Top
 
CaliforniaPeggy Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Fri May-09-08 01:21 AM
Response to Original message
2. My dear BlueIris!
I think that the fact that DU was down made a difference...

For this is amazingly erotic, and beautiful!

I am too tired to read it carefully now...

I"ll be back tomorrow, and will check it out more carefully...

Thank you for it!

:hug:
Printer Friendly | Permalink |  | Top
 
BlueIris Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Fri May-09-08 01:47 AM
Response to Reply #2
3. Yeah, the downtime probably did it. May have to re-post tomorrow.
:-(
Printer Friendly | Permalink |  | Top
 
BlueIris Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Fri May-09-08 08:28 AM
Response to Original message
4. Kick.
Printer Friendly | Permalink |  | Top
 
CaliforniaPeggy Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Fri May-09-08 11:46 AM
Response to Original message
5. OK! Now I have re-read this one more carefully...
And I have to say that this is one of the most encompassing erotic poems that I have ever read...

All the pleasures, all the questions that come with them...

All are addressed here...

It's just beautiful!

And I hope that today more people will enjoy where this poem takes them...

Thank you!

:hug:
Printer Friendly | Permalink |  | Top
 
BlueIris Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Fri May-09-08 01:30 PM
Response to Reply #5
6. :-)
Edited on Fri May-09-08 01:37 PM by BlueIris
Printer Friendly | Permalink |  | Top
 
Westegg Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Fri May-09-08 03:01 PM
Response to Original message
7. Too soon!
Printer Friendly | Permalink |  | Top
 
BlueIris Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Fri May-09-08 10:22 PM
Response to Reply #7
8. Believe it or not, this poem has other stanzas. I just didn't think
I could get away with posting them. I might send along the complete version later, if you want.
Printer Friendly | Permalink |  | Top
 
DU AdBot (1000+ posts) Click to send private message to this author Click to view 
this author's profile Click to add 
this author to your buddy list Click to add 
this author to your Ignore list Tue May 14th 2024, 05:51 PM
Response to Original message
Advertisements [?]
 Top

Home » Discuss » The DU Lounge Donate to DU

Powered by DCForum+ Version 1.1 Copyright 1997-2002 DCScripts.com
Software has been extensively modified by the DU administrators


Important Notices: By participating on this discussion board, visitors agree to abide by the rules outlined on our Rules page. Messages posted on the Democratic Underground Discussion Forums are the opinions of the individuals who post them, and do not necessarily represent the opinions of Democratic Underground, LLC.

Home  |  Discussion Forums  |  Journals |  Store  |  Donate

About DU  |  Contact Us  |  Privacy Policy

Got a message for Democratic Underground? Click here to send us a message.

© 2001 - 2011 Democratic Underground, LLC