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Rising Phoenix Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Fri May-08-09 07:24 PM
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poem, unedited
Edited on Fri May-08-09 08:02 PM by Rising Phoenix
Family Tree
Thanksgiving

“I just don’t want a nigger in the white house;”
said not so tiny tim
while hs pro life father sat quiet as a mouse
“His People” said uncle beard
as if Obama brought the black revolution
the ignorant bigots feard.


Your grandson and daughter in law
Simpy because the have different shape eyes
Next they’ll lynch your daughter
For loving girls as well as guys

And this is the logic you, my mom
Dare to defend
Yes I know there is a child here
What message do you send?
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Shell Beau Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Fri May-08-09 07:31 PM
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1. Hey! How you feeling?
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Rising Phoenix Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Fri May-08-09 07:32 PM
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2. much better thank you
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bigwillq Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Fri May-08-09 07:57 PM
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3. I liked the poem.
It was interesting.

:)

I caught it before the delete.
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Rising Phoenix Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Fri May-08-09 08:04 PM
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4. thanks
I put it back up still some work to be done on it though
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redqueen Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Fri May-08-09 08:09 PM
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5. It seems just fine to me as is.
Well done. :hug:
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Rising Phoenix Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Fri May-08-09 08:58 PM
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8. thank you very much
:hi:
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CaliforniaPeggy Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Fri May-08-09 08:17 PM
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6. My dear Rising Phoenix!
I really like this!

It builds to a very satisfying ending...

Congrats, sweetie!

:hug:
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Rising Phoenix Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Fri May-08-09 08:57 PM
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7. thank you!
that means so much coming from you :loveya:
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