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iris5426 (697 posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore | Thu Jan-31-08 10:21 AM Original message |
Help! I need someone with some editing skills... |
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EFerrari (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore | Thu Jan-31-08 10:28 AM Response to Original message |
1. Here's a version: |
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SteppingRazor (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore | Thu Jan-31-08 10:31 AM Response to Original message |
2. 200 words, eh? Tough one. But here's 211. |
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EFerrari (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore | Thu Jan-31-08 10:47 AM Response to Reply #2 |
5. I like your edit better. That paragraph could stand alone, too. n/t |
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iris5426 (697 posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore | Thu Jan-31-08 10:56 AM Response to Reply #2 |
9. Thanks sfexpat and steppingrazor...i'm trying to use condensed parts from both of yours... |
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SteppingRazor (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore | Thu Jan-31-08 11:01 AM Response to Reply #9 |
10. The only reason I cut out the There ARE two Americas bit... |
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iris5426 (697 posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore | Thu Jan-31-08 11:50 AM Response to Reply #10 |
12. Good point...thanks nt |
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SteppingRazor (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore | Thu Jan-31-08 11:53 AM Response to Reply #12 |
13. No prob! |
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iris5426 (697 posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore | Thu Jan-31-08 12:43 PM Response to Reply #13 |
16. This little project has made me realize I would SUCK at that job |
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EFerrari (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore | Thu Jan-31-08 11:57 AM Response to Reply #9 |
14. If you really want to have fun, take it from 200 to 100 words. |
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iris5426 (697 posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore | Thu Jan-31-08 12:44 PM Response to Reply #14 |
17. I think my head would explode. |
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Rufus2007 (32 posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore | Thu Jan-31-08 10:32 AM Response to Original message |
3. A lot of superfluous language |
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Sonicmedusa (613 posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore | Thu Jan-31-08 10:33 AM Response to Original message |
4. Here's a short and to-the-point version: |
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Sal Minella (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore | Thu Jan-31-08 10:49 AM Response to Reply #4 |
6. Terse. Terse is good. |
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iris5426 (697 posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore | Thu Jan-31-08 10:54 AM Response to Reply #4 |
7. Lol I love it... |
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Fresh_Start (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore | Thu Jan-31-08 10:55 AM Response to Original message |
8. Just under 200 words. |
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flamin lib (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore | Thu Jan-31-08 11:03 AM Response to Original message |
11. 236 words, close enough and there's more than word count. |
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iris5426 (697 posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore | Thu Jan-31-08 12:32 PM Response to Original message |
15. Thank you all for your help! |
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